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Title: Winter Wonderland
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0 Wallpapers Oh!! A Jun-chan wallpaper, only that makes this perfect! (biased)
...on the same side as the girl... HE is a GUY. 3 Wallpapers Kero![]() The HARDEST ability in an artist is to know when to stop, otherwise you might become like those guys who think that walling is adding 70 layers of clogged effects xD I'll remember that for my next wallpaper, instead of decorating it with elaborate things and jsut keeping a single theme. 48 Wallpapers aoie_emesai![]()
I'll have to fix my boat, it looks sorta jagged. I didn't notice it was a lake ^^' I thought it was a shadow that you forgot to remove o_O' To be honest when I saw the wall yesterday I thought the girl was standing on a frozen lake XD Looks better now without the boat ;) 183 Wallpapers I strongly suggest you stop it, can't you see the wallpaper is balanced? adding a lake/boat will remove the balance, not to mention if you keep insisting in adding them on the same side as the girl, you will polute all the left side =p
The HARDEST ability in an artist is to know when to stop, otherwise you might become like those guys who think that walling is adding 70+ layers of clogged effects xD 3 Wallpapers Kero![]() aoie_emesai![]() I'm gonna assume you are pointing to the lake i created ^_^, and the brown thing is my boat.
I'll have to fix my boat, it looks sorta jagged. Here's an idea: what about removing the boat, that also does not fit (I thought it was a frozen brown poopie) and is out of perspective? =p Hahaha, brown poopie ^_^. Not really, but since I just tried to improve it, it didn't do too well, so i'm removing it and the lake. miriambr - Here's all the different versions I made. 3 of them I didn't post here. Starting from 1. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v639/aoie_emesai/WinterWonderland.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v639/aoie_emesai/winterwonderlandtest01.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v639/aoie_emesai/winterwonderlandtest02.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v639/aoie_emesai/winterwonderlandtest03.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v639/aoie_emesai/winterwonderlandtest04.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v639/aoie_emesai/winterwonderlandtest05final.jpg Then the one without the boat and lake. Which will take a bit before it's get posted. There are replyes for this comment, click here to see them183 Wallpapers aoie_emesai![]() I'm gonna assume you are pointing to the lake i created ^_^, and the brown thing is my boat.
I'll have to fix my boat, it looks sorta jagged. Here's an idea: what about removing the boat, that also does not fit (I thought it was a frozen brown poopie) and is out of perspective? =p 3 Wallpapers miriambr![]() I like how the bg now has a defined ground. It was a nice idea to add the mountains. And the bright snowflakes look better too ^_~ I just didn't understand this shadow .I'm gonna assume you are pointing to the lake i created ^_^, and the brown thing is my boat. ![]() I'll have to fix my boat, it looks sorta jagged. 48 Wallpapers I must say it is much better now! Looks like I missed some other versions ^^'
I like how the bg now has a defined ground. It was a nice idea to add the mountains. And the bright snowflakes look better too ^_~ I just didn't understand this shadow . There are replyes for this comment, click here to see them183 Wallpapers yay this now looks good, notice how the whole wallpaper has the same tone and the different color in the character is just enough to giveher some highlight. The other stuff were just removing the highlight from the right location (the character) and spreading it all over the place at random, thus it were realy bad, not it's good
The shadow indeed came out very nice. If you insist in those trees, you could try to make them more soft, with white and very light green, to match the color theme of the image, and probably on background instead of foreground. some little more "small" grass on foreground to remove the areas without any could help, but that would be nitpicking already =p 183 Wallpapers Oh My Good what did you do? please get rid of these trees ASAP, I fail to see how a soft-blue wallpaper matches .. AT ALL .. with those annoying green things ><; really, it looks so horrible I could reject this right now ><;
Also, what's up with the dark blur? , dark snow-flakes ??? really weird stuff!
The shadow is indeed excelent, you overdid it =p I was thinking something simpler like just a blur shadow, but this looks better (though you should add a glow now to show the light comming in from around here .
Anyway, get rid of the very lame trees and the dark stuff that does not match at all and this is on to get good! 183 Wallpapers hum... it's not suppost to be 1024x768. Aghhh... i'll have to check this out. Oh... is that my res it's showing? ... try cliking on "more resolutions" icon ><; yes it's showing your resolution =p anyway, I agree with miriam, the girl seams to be floating ... ever heard of a concept named "shadow" ? =p But I like the background, I don't think it's that empty, it fits ok. Only think is: this tree positioning was VERY unfortunate, it looks as if it's comming out of the girl xD~ try moving it a little to one or the other side lol
er ... signature is too big and not aligned to the bottom, which is weird. 3 Wallpapers I tried to dull the color some cause the overall color scheme was pretty much white and bright sky blue, so I try to darken the entire image a bit with some dull color like gray and darker shades of blue.
I'll work on the grass and add some ornaments on the trees and maybe add some shadows. I thought the snow pile on her head was cute ^_^, lol. 48 Wallpapers I think you should work more on the background. I looks kind of simple. The grass looks weird the way it is now. I think your intention was to put only a few because of the snow, but these ones
![]() look like they're floating. Also these ones could me smaller.I think you overdid with the snow over her head. The trees look plain =/ The sky is nice. I like its colors ^^ The resolution if fine. It's supposed to be 1600x1200, right? The original size is in the description of the wall ;) 1 of 1 ![]() |