Amazing concept, but I still have some issues with the execution as it lacks a little sense I'm afraid.

You really really overused the noise pattern and the image is simply too blurry/grained all over the place.

Also, the pictures are in different dispositions here but you merged or applied the effect on the same angle which spoils the composition. You should have the pictures aligined, than aply the effect and only than rotate/distort them to get them at least somewhat realistic.

Anyway, those were my 2 cents.